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Drift away
To wonderful words
And melting tigers in my bed
I know
That you’re not here

Slip away
To dazzling dreams
And flashing lights upon the screen
I know
I’m here alone

I know
It’s a fantasy
I know
You don’t think of me
I know;
I’ve seen your lips upon another.

Snap right back
To sinking seconds
And the ticking clock upon the wall
I know
That you’re not here

Fall right in
To crumbling corners
And the memories on my fingertips
I know
I’m here alone

I know
It’s a fantasy
I know
You don’t think of me
I know;
I’m here alone.
©2007-2009 ~protege--moi
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Author's Comments

The melting tiger part isn't as random as it seems. =P
Haruki Murakami - Norwegian Wood. :heart: :heart: :heart:

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:iconwotchervoid:
Hmm, and here I was wanting to comment on the melting tiger thing...until I got to the end...when I was like...'oh. oops.' o_o;
heh.
*goes off and doodles tigers melting in a bed*
...
XD

I likey, by the way. ^^;


p.s. loookie at the mood icon for this one! *squees*

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:iconprotege--moi:
Thank you for the fav! :heart:

I'm glad you like. =)

I'm also glad I included that comment about the melting tigers. =P

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xoxo protege--moi . :blowkiss:
:iconabundantamenities:
I’ve seen your lips upon another.

good way to put it. original, harsh.

i was going to comment on the melting tiger, but as long as it makes sense to you!
another good job.

i like how you switched the 'im here alone' and 'you're not here' it squashed the possibility of tedious repetition

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
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:love:

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
:iconshattered-black-rose:
*blink* I sleep with stuffed tigers (two of them), so melting tigers just made me think of that.

The emotion in this is quite fabulous. Can't say I've ever really been there [felt that], but fabulous all the same. :)

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My signature could beat up your signature.
:iconprotege--moi:
Thank you so much for your kind comment:)

Hehe...tigers are awesome.;)

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xoxo protege--moi . :blowkiss:
:iconshattered-black-rose:
I agree. They're one of my favourite creatures. Like on memes that ask you "if you could become one animal for a day, which would it be?" I almost always answer dragon or tiger. :aww:

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My signature could beat up your signature.
:iconprotege--moi:
Hehe. Being a dragon would be quite awesome. I would love to fly.
I think being a penguin would be quite fun too.

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xoxo protege--moi . :blowkiss:

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